She doesn’t seem to remember
that she was making tea
or that she’s still in her slippers
or that there was ever any pain at all.
He turns off the stove, and brings the tea,
it’s sunny on the porch, and
she is surrounded
by faces who know her name
and laud her with stories
that confuse, crack sharply
across her mind, lake, mid-freeze.
She looks at them, gaze watery,
brave, blankly innocent, then
stares into her tea
as if deciding what to do with it.
December 4, 2011 at 1:54 am
A bullseye of a poem.
M
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Marie Marshall
writer/poet/editor/blogger
Scotland
http://mairibheag.com
http://kvennarad.wordpress.com
December 5, 2011 at 11:51 pm
Thank you very much, Marie, for taking the time to read, and comment.
Cheers,
Melissa
December 6, 2011 at 12:17 am
My pleasure.
December 4, 2011 at 10:38 am
This is brilliant – such captivating and honest descriptions. The end is wonderful.
December 6, 2011 at 11:02 pm
Thank you for such a lovely comment. Means a lot to me that you read it and liked it.
-Melissa
December 6, 2011 at 4:18 pm
Beautiful , haunting and bittersweet poem.
December 6, 2011 at 11:00 pm
Thank you so much for taking the time to read, and comment, Francina.