A poem, like a silver fish
ran through my shallows
today, and slipped through
my hands. I, a great and clumsy bear,
graceless and awkward, unable to catch it.
You make the better bear, you know,
and I like it best
when you nose around
under my trees,
looking for apples.
December 27, 2011 at 1:10 am
Wonderful imagist piece.
December 27, 2011 at 8:19 pm
Thank you for reading and taking the time to respond. I appreciate it!
December 27, 2011 at 7:52 pm
I really like this. I mean I REALLY like this! :)
December 27, 2011 at 8:19 pm
The capitalized “really” made my heart leap. :) Thank you so much!
January 1, 2012 at 5:21 pm
Honey…honey…. bears mingle around it and
get bee-bites……
Lovely images in your poems !
January 1, 2012 at 9:58 pm
So pleased that you like it. Thank you!