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Excellence

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English: White and purple hyacinths

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I thought Melissa’s poem on “Moderation” was so original that I decided to write a poem after the same idea. I hope you don’t mind, Melissa. “Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery.” (Charles Caleb Colton) I liked her poem very much and hope I can attain her standard with “Excellence.”

 

 

Prime rib, a cheese fondue, some brand-new shoes,
those chocolate-coated strawberries, and jazz:
I hold these things in high regard. Topaz,
and amethyst, brave soldiers, front-page news

without disaster, criminals, or war,
the lilacs and the hyacinths of spring–
these treasures scatter diamonds as they bring
such satisfaction. I do not need more.

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Author: Maggie

I am a retired language arts teacher from Michigan who has published a book of poems. I write poetry in the classic forms. My reading interests are non-fiction, especially in the areas of medicine and spirituality. I am a pianist, and also enjoy word puzzles and games.

2 thoughts on “Excellence

  1. Love it!! and thank you so much for the compliment! :) (And now I’m definitely craving prime rib.) Well done, Maggie!

  2. Whew! I’m so glad you didn’t mind that I took off on your idea. I just loved “Moderation.” Thanks for writing it. This is such a great blog, and I’m happy to be part of it.

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