If I were Venus, and
you were the moon
I would likewise cross the sun
determined to reach you,
the arc of my resolve set.
Feet on fire.
Nothing quenches me but you.
Venus and the Moon
20 Lines A Day
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June 12, 2012 at 11:52 pm
Pure beauty …awesome post .. :)
June 13, 2012 at 10:19 am
Thank you, Tim.
June 13, 2012 at 8:55 am
True Love
June 13, 2012 at 10:20 am
Oh, yes. And thank you for taking the time to read, and comment.
June 13, 2012 at 10:50 am
I always read them :) You and the rest are truly inspiring to me
xo
Eunice
June 13, 2012 at 11:16 am
I look forward to when poems by you appear. They’re always so concise…and FULL of meaning. I tend to “write long,” but wish I also had the ability to chisel a thought or feeling down, distill it to its elemental pieces. You do that SO WELL.
June 13, 2012 at 1:00 pm
Thank you so much, Maggie.
The smaller pieces are exactly why I created 20 Lines a Day (initially 20 Lines or Less) and it was to make myself write at least a little each day. (I don’t always attend to the “each day” part.)
They might appear elsewhere, though, if there is a thought I want to develop, or even if I borrow just a phrase for a longer piece that I might submit elsewhere for publication or competition, perhaps.
Thank you again!!
June 13, 2012 at 6:53 pm
Sublime :)
June 13, 2012 at 9:14 pm
:) Thank you so.
June 14, 2012 at 12:52 pm
A wonderful picture…
June 14, 2012 at 1:37 pm
Thanks so much, asoulwalker