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Only Dreaming

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Reblogged from Can you hear me whisper... :

My heart quickens when I hear your footstep

Through the mist your shadow forms

Tall, shoulders broad,

But wait, I'm only dreaming...

Two hands clasped a strength in one,

The other holding tightly,

Rings exchanged,

But wait, I'm only dreaming...

Your finger gently brushes my hair,

Our eyes meet,

and time stops,

But wait, I'm only dreaming...

To fall asleep beside you with my head upon your chest…

Read more… 21 more words

Here goes for my first submission for the weekly challenge. Four lines short, hope to improve on that.

Author: Tia

quiet, creative, challenging

5 thoughts on “Only Dreaming

  1. I love this Tia! As for the 4 lines short, I’ve learned they don’t seem to care about it…not a hard and fast rule. But it is “20 lines or less”, so you’re good. Me on the other hand…I made up for what you lacked and more this time. :)

  2. awesome post Tia …for this contest tho can you please post on the 20 lines site …Thanks ..Tim

    • Tim help, when I reblogged that’s what I chose what went wrong. I am so not tech savvy. Pleeeeeease help

      • lol just come to 20 lines and post just like you do on yours , Hover the 20 lines at the top left , come down to new and right to post ….you can post directly on our blog…If you need ant other help please ask…Tim

  3. Thanks, I’m such a dweeb bet cha haven’t heard that for awhile lol, giggle giggle giggle, I really should sleep more on night shift but it never works to my advantage . I promise to try and do the right thing now that I know. And if you hear a subtle scream for help, it’s me needing rescue : )

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