Reblogged from Can you hear me whisper... :
My heart quickens when I hear your footstep
Through the mist your shadow forms
Tall, shoulders broad,
But wait, I'm only dreaming...
Two hands clasped a strength in one,
The other holding tightly,
Rings exchanged,
But wait, I'm only dreaming...
Your finger gently brushes my hair,
Our eyes meet,
and time stops,
But wait, I'm only dreaming...
To fall asleep beside you with my head upon your chest…
Here goes for my first submission for the weekly challenge. Four lines short, hope to improve on that.
June 20, 2012 at 9:30 am
I love this Tia! As for the 4 lines short, I’ve learned they don’t seem to care about it…not a hard and fast rule. But it is “20 lines or less”, so you’re good. Me on the other hand…I made up for what you lacked and more this time. :)
June 20, 2012 at 11:13 am
awesome post Tia …for this contest tho can you please post on the 20 lines site …Thanks ..Tim
June 20, 2012 at 12:24 pm
Tim help, when I reblogged that’s what I chose what went wrong. I am so not tech savvy. Pleeeeeease help
June 20, 2012 at 12:35 pm
lol just come to 20 lines and post just like you do on yours , Hover the 20 lines at the top left , come down to new and right to post ….you can post directly on our blog…If you need ant other help please ask…Tim
June 20, 2012 at 12:42 pm
Thanks, I’m such a dweeb bet cha haven’t heard that for awhile lol, giggle giggle giggle, I really should sleep more on night shift but it never works to my advantage . I promise to try and do the right thing now that I know. And if you hear a subtle scream for help, it’s me needing rescue : )