She looked at him with a passion rarely seen now a days . They acted like a couple madly in love for years . Not knowing how this would turn out he softly asked her ” would you like to go for a walk”..? Her response came as quite the surprise as she spoke with a shaking voice ” I’m sorry I need to go” . Feelings hurt he still looked through a smile and said “ok maybe some other time .
Tom and Margie were made for each other , right down to the way they perceived their dreams of the future. They met at a county fair , both standing in line at an ice cream stand . Both of them stealing looks from the other every chance they could . The first words spoken I think was “ would you like a napkin ” by Margie as Tom was having problems with his cone . They passed each other several times at the fair shyly grabbing looks every chance they could . Margie was a very attractive girl reddish-brown hair , a slim figure and one of the most gifted persons in her high school class . Her attitude and level of maturity also added to her great personality. Tom was a very gifted boy as well , never using his gifts to their full potential , he did just enough to get by . He also was a handsome young man , never having to worry about relationships as girls were constantly chasing him . Tom and Margie’s friends all knew the would eventually be together , that’s all either one ever talked about .
Growing up in different towns caused somewhat of small problem as they didn’t have transportation to see each other the way they wanted to . Margie’s parents also being seriously religious also posed a problem .
TO BE CONTINUED …
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June 25, 2012 at 7:33 pm
Reblogged this on timzauto.
June 25, 2012 at 8:41 pm
Young love is so beautiful.. great story Tim, can’t wait to read more! :)
June 26, 2012 at 1:43 am
Hi Tim,
I enjoyed your 20 lines. Best of luck to you.
Thanks for recommending Margie Lawson’s post at Writers in the Storm!
-Fae Rowen
June 27, 2012 at 6:40 pm
Your welcome … loved your post as well…Tim
June 26, 2012 at 3:45 am
A beautiful beginning!
June 27, 2012 at 3:31 pm
Is this to be an ongoing story of love at first sight?
June 27, 2012 at 6:33 pm
Kinda lol but not just first sight …kinda a Romeo and Juliet story