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Where Is That Woman? (Weekly Challenge)

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Where is that woman I used to be

So naive and trusting

Before life happened

Now jaded, shaded, not quite the same

It’s hard to trust when you feel the sting of betrayal

After you realize that not everyone can be trusted

After you’ve been hurt enough times

Now I’m somewhere in between

Still trying to be that one I was before

Still loving deeply, and forever

Forgiving…yet not quite

I surprise myself sometimes

With the thoughts that come

Even the words sometimes that just come out

I wasn’t like that before

I’m homesick for that dumb, naive girl

But not enough to return

It wasn’t safe there

But I’m not quite sure…

Is this better?

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Author: Anne Sikes

"But we have this treasure in earthen vessels, that the excellency of the power may be of God, and not of us." (2 Cor. 4:7) Sharing the journey through daily thoughts and struggles, examination of Scripture, poetry, music and art.

8 thoughts on “Where Is That Woman? (Weekly Challenge)

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  2. I love it @ It’s hard to trust when you feel the sting of betrayal….

    • Thanks Tim, and it really is. I go back and forth day to day with all this I think…or minute by minute sometimes. I’ll get there eventually…I hope. :)

  3. The good & bad may not ever balance out, you seem to ask in this poem,
    Where Is That Woman?” Naivete vs. maturity…

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