Lapping wild ,
Gushing down,
Mother Earth it seems to drown.
breaking morbid monotony
along come the drops , in rhythmic symphony.
Showcasing nature’s free soul
without any rush, or unworthy monetary goal
washing away my troubles
quenching my sun baked soul.
Looking up at the gray cloud
I stretch out my hand
and laugh aloud
at the stillness of it all!
The drops that pitter patter
seem like a never lasting lullaby.
Washing away my worn out thoughts
it ends it’s dance
As I wave to the departing clouds
the sun begins to peep through.
I sigh till the next time
and for now dear rain
I bid thee
Adieu:)
July 6, 2012 at 9:58 am
Love it @ quenching my sun baked soul….nice post ..Tim
July 6, 2012 at 10:29 am
Please feel free to join our challenges as well , it’s a lot of fun …
July 7, 2012 at 3:20 am
thanks and I definately look forward to it.
July 6, 2012 at 5:19 pm
Excellent!
July 7, 2012 at 3:22 am
thanks so much, I tried my best. it isn’t as polished as yours but atleast I get to rack my brains creatively a bit
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July 8, 2012 at 9:00 am
Fine rhyme & rhythm prompts second & third readings. Great job…
July 8, 2012 at 11:11 am
Thanks for the encouragement , i will try to work on this more often!