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Life, Liberty and the Pursuit of Happiness
(c) 2012, Norman Dziedzic Jr.
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July 6, 2012 at 10:16 pm
Thanks for playing Norman , I’ve added you to my update …Tim
July 7, 2012 at 12:06 pm
Very fresh!
July 7, 2012 at 5:17 pm
Thanks Melissa… but I must say, I did not originate this form. After I showed another poem (http://bloggernorm.blogspot.com/2012/05/tunnels-blocksof-words-held-together-w.html) to a college professor, he turned me on to some concrete poetry. I don’t remember the author but I’m pretty sure there is a poem that used this form with the first line of the Lord’s Prayer.
July 7, 2012 at 6:02 pm
I’ve seen it done before, but not here. :)
I appreciate your sensibility. M.
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