At 17 she packed her bags and left her sleepy town
while her daughter laid in her crib…
and all she left behind were
a kiss on the forehead and a pair
of knitted booties with a monogram – Ruby…
She took the bus to Vegas
wanting to make it big…
pretending she’d never heard the cry
when she closed the door behind her…
time slipped by like a blur and
all she had to show for the years she was away
were bruises here and there -
souvenirs from the men who made her promises…
a broken heart and a tired soul…
And like the prodigal son
she returned to her sleepy town…
to find comfort…wanting redemption -
to cradle the daughter she left behind
only to be told “Ruby is dead. She died in her sleep.”

August 9, 2012 at 6:59 am
you had me reading each and every line. Good job!
August 9, 2012 at 9:47 am
Oh! I really don’t know what to write but I must say that this piece is emotionally painful, yet beautiful in its own way. Thank You for participating in the challenge. :-)
Love,
HA
August 9, 2012 at 3:37 pm
Incredible! This is amazing, I can’t believe how much you told in such imaginative detail in so few lines. Excellent writing!
August 9, 2012 at 4:57 pm
The pain in this young girls heart was fathomable-great work!
August 9, 2012 at 5:42 pm
A tragic irony…
August 10, 2012 at 1:16 am
So sad and tragic.