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Ghost Hunt

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Kate was sure they’d all stopped breathing.

Poppy’s hand crept into hers and stayed.

 

“There’s something here,” Jack whispered. “Listen.”

 

A rushing noise. A distant sea, or the wind, or a thousand souls sighing.

Would they have caught the sound without his instruction?

 

Kate licked her lips, swallowed hard,

Natural scepticism pending.

Jack’s eyes flew open, closed again. So fast, did she imagine it?

He would be enjoying this, delighted to be proved right. Insufferable later.

 

Sound intensified, raised to a whine, a scream – and

A glass on the sideboard shattered.

 

“She’s gone,” Jack said.

Kate felt goose bumps along her spine, “It’s bloody freezing,” and felt Poppy shiver beside her.

“The spirits always have an effect on temperature.” Jack smiled.

 

“OK, you’ve proved your point. Can we go now?” and she turned, expecting to find the door.

 

 

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Author: Pat

Writing because I have to, blogging because I like it. Making felt is the day job, but that doesn't stop me writing inside my head! No full length novel published - YET, but several stories for magazines. Wannabe a published author, stylishly minimalist and thin.

13 thoughts on “Ghost Hunt

  1. Yes you gave me the creeps :)

    • Good – pleased to hear it! :-)

      • Love your Photo too

        I love these kind of stories Stephen King writes really strange, scary ones and he doesn’t live far from me :) I am hard pressed to put them down but the scare me as did your you know hair raising kind good energy in them :)

      • Ooh – Stephen King! If he lived near me, I might have to haunt him!
        Love a lot of his stuff. Love having my toes curled and love trying to make others shiver.

      • Well you have the ability I do not scare easily and had your story gone one I may have been creep-ed out :) He is a strange man who I just adore as well.

      • He is strange, but he has some great ideas. My favourite is Misery.
        Which is very scary.

      • Yes that was Block Buster material in that one
        One that really touched me was Pet Cemetery ( had 4 Springer Spaniels at the time I would have given my life for)
        Needful Things was kind of interesting too oh the memories he has filled my head with :)

      • I found out about him first from Salem’s Lot, which I tried to watch on my own one evening.
        Big mistake. Kept having to switch channels!
        Have read a lot of his since then.
        His book on Writing is good too.

      • Well you keep up the good work and give him a run for his money! I love his books movies not so much as they are really never all the books are. I should see if he has a BLOG lol he is on my Facebook list of those I follow I must check if he is I will be sure to SHARE :)

  2. They and yours should be word not what I typed and then hit enter :) I am a trucker who loves to take photos NOT A WRITER :)

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