Off and on I have been trying to work on Palindromes, which I find so-ooo difficult. Not sure if this works at all, but I offer it as my poor attempt.
Fading dreams
in deep black.
Dark shadows appear
then sleep
comes when least expected.
Time passing
reading
insomniacs all reading,
passing time expected least
when comes sleep.
Then appear shadows
dark, black,
deep
in dreams.
Fading.
October 26, 2012 at 5:13 pm
I don’t know what works for anyone else, but I find these impressive even apart from its being a palindrome. I don’t think I’ve ever tried this as a writing exercise, so . . . I’ll give it a shot, but doubtfully come up with anything postable!
October 26, 2012 at 6:25 pm
Well good luck because they are so Hard!! I’m still not sure if it works or not. They are seriously weird.
October 26, 2012 at 7:38 pm
I am impressed!
October 27, 2012 at 4:37 am
Thank you. Glad someone is! Took me ages and even then couldn’t decide if it actually worked!! :-)
October 27, 2012 at 10:32 am
I am also impressed. I can’t seem to get more than 9 lines. Well done! I think they’re incredibly hard.
October 27, 2012 at 1:47 pm
I think they’re incredibly hard as well! working on another one at the moment, but it is not happening for me yet!