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6:20 A.M.

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She died without me,

waiting until early morning hours.

Allowing a small grin, I know that if she were here

we’d giggle because we weren’t morning people.

She would have said to me, “I’ll take my leave

when you can’t see.” She knew I would be sleeping.

But that phone, that nurse’s voice,

the words that scarred me: There’s no time

acceptable.

I went, saw her. Saw her, gone.

Mom, you didn’t.

A white room, nursing home,

white blanket over her, hands folded,

not in prayer. That was left to me.

Her legacy? Fifty years of love

and no regrets.

We spoke those words out loud,

she to me, I to her.

They hold me now.

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Author: Maggie

I am a retired language arts teacher from Michigan who has published a book of poems. I write poetry in the classic forms. My reading interests are non-fiction, especially in the areas of medicine and spirituality. I am a pianist, and also enjoy word puzzles and games.

4 thoughts on “6:20 A.M.

  1. My times were 5:20am and 4:25pm for my Aunt and Mom these past few years. Very touching Maggie.

  2. Lines like the one about not being morning people – those are the parts that personalize poetry. Those are what are so frequently lacking in the pieces I am reading these days. There is realness and truth to this that I really liked.

  3. Thank you, Switters and Jessica. I appreciate your comments. The poems about my parents’ deaths popped out of me unexpectedly this morning and are written in no particular form, which is very unusual for me.

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