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The Window

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Her world
behind the window
cracked and rotted wood
falling flakes of paint

curtain not of any colour
greyish hue
old, no longer pretty
need replacing

her world
behind the window
peering out to the garden
sliding her hand along the grimy glass

that she was once able to see through
clearly, but now cannot

how is her mind
behind the window
casting her eyes on weeds
below that need
removing for they old

no longer cared for

and she asks herself …. why don’t they come to visit anymore

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Author: ramblingsfromamum

Welcome & thank you so much for popping in to visit. I am obsessed by writing & also by this site it seems. I am a Mum from Melbourne Australia. An Author of The Empty Nest - A Mother's Hidden Grief (E Pub) through Amazon & Lulu. I have 2 beautiful daughters & a loving man by my side. Please let me know what you think of my posts by any comment you may care to leave. Once again thank you for stopping by, I really do appreciate your visit.

3 thoughts on “The Window

  1. Wonderful imagery and strong metaphor in this.

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